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Beat: 켄드릭 라마- 하이파워 (HiiiPower- Kendrick Lamar)

Hook:

Visions of Tablo staring at me

Saying bravo man you killed the stage homie

Feel like I'm looking at my younger self when I see you

Believe in yourself, then everybody else wanna be you

Verse 1:

They say kendrick is a legend you embarrass this beat

You aint worthy to be spitting on what he already did

Im sorry but I have to do this, let out all the pain

They say you do anything with a gun to your brain

Scariest thing is I don't feel scared anymore

Like I chose to disappear within the status quo

Like I accepted fate and gave up fighting for myself

Gave up trying on myself, left success for someone else

Are fears still fears if you get used to em?

If you Numb to the pain that used to abuse you?

They say last few seconds pain loosens the noose

This a Coup de grace, I'm breaking like the news

No headlines, couple words black and white box

Destined to be the newest lining of the litter box

Once had that fire burning in me like a liquor shot

Now I hide behind the words my lifes a living twitter thought

Hook:

Visions of Zico, Mino staring at me

We did it, so theres no way you can't do it too homie

You don't have to sacrifice your rap make it in this game

Do you, just become the new standard to attain

Verse 2:

You don't have to be from outer space to feel alien

Think I understand why some addicted to the valium

Depression gonna kill me slower than uranium

Unless Loneliness puts the bullet in my cranium 

Rolling boulders endlessly, modern day Sisyphus

Man this ain't mythical, its getting real difficult

I feel it real physical, Bones heart cuticles

The reaper coming for me and he sharpening his sickle

Life is a beach, mine just made of quicksand

The more that I struggle I just sink, gotta think fast

I aint got a wristband, no entrance to promised land

Wanna sleep forever, can't stay up need a kickstand

Rap rules me I aint bout the C.R.E.A.M like tartar sauce

Tantalus is taunting me all the way from Tartarus

Saying that I'm tantamount to him's a understatement

Tantalizing dreams of holding mics without judgement

Hook:

Visions of Logic staring at me

Better remember the smell of that debut album homie

Better remember them tears shed, returning only

When you hold your own album and start your own story

Verse 3:

I just wanna

Give people more comfort than an infant's thumb

Spread the wisdom like we born to, homoSAPIEN

Go against the gradient, past the end of pavements

There's no reason for me to stop halfway like radians

You can waste the time, eating two slices of pi

But I ain't going in a circle, On that straight and narrow line

Tryna catch a flight, to New Year's in Dubai

But I keep getting shot down, clay pigeon bullseye

Stray kitchen fruitfly, killed without a guilty mind

And definitely not a single thought or a goodbye

Hard to survive if you tryna be the good guy

Thats why people cave to the influence like junior high

Even if I fall I would never break a bone

That's the only perk of being at the bottom all alone

Back is getting calloused, I've been on this wall too long

At least the only way is forward right? well you wrong

Hook:

Visions of YG staring at me

You got the skills that we need so join the company

You can finally put your name right above that dotted line

For real man, nobody holding you back this time

Verse 4:

If a tree falls in a forest with nobody around

Then did it even happen, did it even make a sound? 

Im screaming right now, Battle cry, we back in Saigon

Nobody hears me, so did I even write this song?

Jane Fonda, Don't know me but they hate me

Anonymous mascot for those strugglin daily

Cuz … we all just tryna make it right 

Life's too dark so we chase any and every light

Taking Temporary flights, efforts to forget our plight

Escaping life seems easier than trying to survive

Thank God, that I found in me the will to write

instead of getting by relying on the crystalline

Stare up at the ceiling ask myself every night

How did it come to this, are you gonna let it die?

yeah Knowing if it did you would sing the lullaby

Cuz you tired of following someone else's syllabi

Cuz you tired of following someone else's syllabi

Cuz you tired of following someone else's syllabi

Cuz I'm tired of following someone else's syllabi